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It was on my eleventh birthday that I first started hearing the voices. It was three days after my thirteenth birthday that I started seeing them. It was then that I knew I wasn't normal.

I could see things, hear things, sense things, feel things that no one else could. Things that no one else even knew existed. It was also then that my nightmares changed. Instead of drowning in pools of water, I was now drowning in oceans of blood. Instead of being chased by dinosaurs I was now being attacked by rotting corpses. It seemed inconspicuous enough, I doubt that anyone else suspected. The sirens I heard, the dogs barking, the people, the evil presences I felt, I chalked them up to my overactive imagination. This went on for seven years; then, three weeks after my twentieth birthday, I found out the truth...
new story idea...good or no? tell me what you think. i also need a title
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Feonyx512 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
Um... are you ever going to finish this? seriously, I might do one like it. Just to get it out, you know what I mean?
If you need help on this one, I'll be more than happy to help, dear!
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AmorVitae Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Professional Photographer
eh, idk. i started chapter one but i think it went *flop* i'll email it to you so you can read it...
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Feonyx512 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
okay. like right now. lol
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AmorVitae Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Professional Photographer
i did.
its just chap 1
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Feonyx512 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
okay. if I like it, do you promise to finish it?
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AmorVitae Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Professional Photographer
ummmm....possibly...did u read it?
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Feonyx512 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
yes. check your email.
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AmorVitae Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Professional Photographer
i did. if u were paying attention u'd also notice that i emailed u back
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JPelmen Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
wow sounds very interesting! :nod:
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AmorVitae Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2009  Professional Photographer
^.^
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JPelmen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2009
^_^d
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DarkBunny31 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
Hell yeah, Damn Good, will this be Constantine-Like?
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AmorVitae Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thanks....and idk...I never saw the movie xD
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DarkBunny31 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
Not the movie, the Comic Books. It's looks like a bit. But it's a nice idea, you should work on it.
^^
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AmorVitae Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009  Professional Photographer
Lol, nope. Not unless their older comics...I used to read them when I was younger but I haven't read anything new.

And thanks. I definately have an idea of where it is going. I just hope I can get it out of my head and into paper properly
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DarkBunny31 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
k, I'll be waiting to see.
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AmorVitae Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2009  Professional Photographer
^.^ i wrote a lil bit today when i was in the truck at work...
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