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How it begins:
A hook,
A pull,
A grasp,
Suddenly, you are entranced.

Assaulting your senses,
Vivid description.

A climax,
A crunch,
A catastrophe,
Amazingly, here is the end.

A death,
A decline
Insanity, of course.

Affecting your emotions,
Lives played out on a page.

Isn't tragedy just a fatal comedy of errors?
so i was going through my hard drive on my laptop and found this buried in the rest of my semi-older poetry...
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:iconremembeme4entertinty:
I really like it. This is a grreat piece.
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:iconamorvitae:
AmorVitae Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009  Professional Photographer
thanks so much ^.^
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blondeonastick Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
i like it, very beautiful, and thoughtful
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:iconamorvitae:
AmorVitae Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Professional Photographer
thanks...
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:iconblondeonastick:
blondeonastick Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
your welcome :)
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:iconamorvitae:
AmorVitae Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Professional Photographer
^.^
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:iconnakamura-chiaki:
Nakamura-Chiaki Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm you said something there .. It's good
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:iconamorvitae:
AmorVitae Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Professional Photographer
thanks...i think i was reading hamlet or something when i wrote it...
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:iconnakamura-chiaki:
Nakamura-Chiaki Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I haven't read Hamlet yet .. Any good? :P
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AmorVitae Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Professional Photographer
its not bad...it can be difficult to get through though because of the old style of writing...the movie with Mel Gibson and Glenn Close was very good...
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